Babyface-Nic's Reviews

[Haiku Animation by Jim]

I still think its great!

I saw ur haiku jim... and i still think its terrific. No matter what the others think. I put up mines too by the way.

[Quiz Game Tutorial]

What!!!

This thing needs a lot of work. There was no order, and everything was so scattered and sloppy (no offense).

killslasher responds:

Well, admittably, that is true. I might try a second version, but I really don't have that much time. Thanks on your opinion though.

[Morris Saiyens]

Um, That was so weird.. thus making it interesting

Hey jim... That was actually pretty interesting. And i started laughing just because it was so weird, but it worked for me somehow. Anyway, I didn't know u had the power to become a supersayin... U never did any of that in school. lol.

[Zombie Teachers Attack]

Boring!

The drawing was good, but other than that the game was absolutly pointless. You could make it better by giving the player a goal and something to keep track of the score. I mean anything would be better than just pointlessly shooting at zombies over and over and over and... uh... you get the point. So try again. I know you can do it!

shadowcatxavier responds:

Thanks, I'll do that

[Flash Presentation Ocean]

Good, but needs work.

This was pretty cool idea. It does need some work though. For your index, It's not really a good idea to put words over an image like that because it makes it hard to see. Type and images are both thought of as images/graphics and u don't carelessly put two graphics together because you won't be able to see it properly. I you are going to put type on an image try messing with the type till it works. For yours, i think u should try putting a drop shadow behind the type. It will make it stand out. (this only works in some cases, u have to play with the type to get it right.)
Also when you go to the under sea part i couldn't find a way to return.
I'm not writing this to make u feel bad or nothin' cause its actually pretty good. Just giving u ideas to help u improve it. :)

[4way Pong]

Interesting....

It a pretty interesting game. It also pretty easy to control too, its just all about timing and placement. I liked it so keep up the good work.